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This is more of a prologue than a chapter one, focusing on developing characters. It's a bit dialoggy but I've received good reviews on it so far.
Whiteworld
There aren’t many things more beautiful than a heavy snowfall, huge crisp flakes of the white stuff falling steadily from the sky, so thickly that you can barely see twenty feet in front of you. There’d been so much recently that the lumineers weren’t even bothering to scoop the snow out of the street lamps and relight the candles anymore.
And so it was in a dark winter world that the lone figure trudged down the street, holding the front of his leather wintercloak closed against the cold. The journey to his destination would be, on a good day, no more than twenty minutes long, a tranquil walk amidst the gothic architecture of Intel City, but in the gathering snow it would likely take more than an hour.
Eventually he arrived at Ned’s Butchery, the block’s unofficial meeting and gossip center, and the start of his shortcut. Satisfied with a glance that no was around, he slipped into the alley and followed it’s rough brick walls to a rusty old ladder. Glancing over his shoulder once more, he began the hard climb, about thirty rungs to the top. By now the cold was getting through his boots and gloves, but the going would probably be faster on the roofs, though still excruciatingly long.
“Leah?” He asked through clenched teeth as he approached the sillhoute.
The figure sitting on the rim of the skylight leaped up, turned gracefully in the air, and landed, breathing like she’d just run a marathon. She too wore the standard leather wintercloak, a hooded longrobe built for warmth. Underneath the hood, white hair covered one eye and the left portion of a beautiful face. She tilted her head up at a considerable angle to see his face before yelling angrily, “Rulf! Way to be a creeper! For all I know you could’ve been some rapist or something!”
“Maybe you should be inside then.” He grinned
She laughed lightheartedly, “says you, look at yourself, a mile from home in the worst storm of the winter! Do your parents know you’re here?”
He shrugged nonchalantly, “I left them a note.”
She rolled her eyes and said sarcasticly, “Oh, then everything’s fine, because nothing could happen to you out in the freezing cold in the middle of the night.”
“Eh, I can take care of myself.”
She shook here head, “still playing the soldier, huh? I see you are still wearing that ridiculous wintercloak.”
He looked down at himself. It was ridiculous, he couldn’t deny it, yet he still enjoyed wearing it around. It was the cloak his parents gave him for Alms Day, dyed in the darkest black he could find, fixed with a dozen pockets sewn into it for ‘combat utility’, and further modified with a strip of cloth attached to the hood to go across his mouth.
“Well, my parents won’t just buy me a new one, Venten leather isn’t exactly cheap.”
She ignored his last statement. “Why did you come anyways? You couldn’t have wanted to see me that badly.” She said, hands on hips.
Rulf placed a hand on his heart and with a voice dripping with mock sadness said, “I’m hurt, you doubt my love for you?”
At that instant she flew forward, catching him completely off guard, bearing him to the ground, and pinching his ears…hard, “I definitely doubt your sanity, and will continue to unless you give me a good answer!”
“Uncle, uncle!” Rulf moaned, laughing.
Leah released his ears but refused to let him up. “Answer, now.”
“You’re so mean to me.”
She giggled and rolled off into the snow next to him.
“Alright, you’ve persuaded me, I’ll tell you why I’m here. Coincidentally, it happens to concern my uncle!” He exclaimed, emphasizing the last word with an outrageous sweep of the arm.
Leah’s eyes immediately went wide, “High Commander Ledrin Storm?” she asked with childish wonder.
“Of course, you know I only have one Uncle.”
“What about him?” She asked, eyes still full of bewilderment. She, like just about every other girl in town, had a fantasy crush on the town’s hero, who had become High Commander of the Republic’s forces years ago.
“I don’t know if I can part with that information so lightly….” He told her with mock indecisiveness.
Leah leaned over and planted her lips heavily on his.
“A cold kiss if there ever was one, but I suppose it will do. Uncle Ledrin is coming here, to this very town, in three days.”
She squeeled with delight, and, with a faraway look in her eyes, gushed “He’s so dashing.”
“Hmmpf, I came here to let you be the first to know, not to suffer such blows to my self-esteem.”
“You’re cute too” She said quickly, kissing him again, more lightly than before.
“Anyways, that’s why I came. What are you doing sitting up here?” He asked with interest.
“You dummy, you know I come up here on gorgeous nights like this all the time.”
“Oh yeah… But that’s usually when there are lots of stars out, not snow.”
“How would you know? This is the first time you were dumb enough to come visit during a blizzard.” She sighed There was a pause as they looked up into the night, feeling the snow upon their faces.
“It is beautiful, it’s like I’m looking at time, little pieces coming from the sky straight towards me, making my future.” There was another pause, lasting a few seconds.
“Wow, that was really…profound…not.” She said in mocking girlish voice. “You’re so absent minded sometimes…”
“Speaking of absent stuff, I can’t feel my fingers or toes, how about we go in now?”
Leah rose and brushed herself off, “Yeah it’s pretty cold, some hot chocolate would really hit the spot right now.”
Rulf stood up and followed suit, shaking all the snow off his back, “After you, milady.”
With her head lowering under the rim of the roof she said “Why, so you can catch my leg and pull both of us off if you fall?”
Rulf just followed wordlessly, not wanting to give her anything else to tease him about at the moment.
As soon as she opened the door, Rulf automatically felt a bit warmer as the fire-heated air rushed past him. The inside of the home, like most in the area, looked almost exactly like his. The whole first floor was one large and cozy room about fifteen paces long and only slightly wider. It functioned as the kitchen, living room, and dining room and it smelled just like a home should, of fresh baking and burning wood. As if the fire this wood fed wasn't enough to chase the winter chill from one's body, there were blankets and furs everywhere, on the floor and covering every piece of furniture, the simple but comfortable couches and armchairs locally made. In the corner a flight of stairs led up to two bedrooms, a large one and a smaller one.
Mrs. Bron looked up from her needlework at the pair. She had been sick for the last couple of weeks with the flu, and was just starting to recover, her warm round face gaining it’s complexion back as her white hair once again started showing the hereditary silvery hue. She smiled and said “Leah….and Rulf, didn’t see you there at first, your parents let you come here in this weather?”
“N..I mean yes, yes they are being more lenient in regards to my comings and goings and such.” Rulf said while hanging up his wintercloak
Mrs. Bron just smiled knowingly, “We’ve always got room for a friend, and fortunately I just brewed up a good sized pot of hot chocolate.” And with that she returned to her needlework.
“Thanks Mrs. Bron” Rulf said courteously.
“Aw, you didn’t have to Mom, I’m so glad you’re feeling well enough to do that though.”
Leah poured out two glasses of steaming warm hot chocolate. “We’ll be up in my room if you need anything.”
“So, tell me more about this ‘news’” Leah asked while sipping her hot chocolate.
The two were sitting on the tigerskin rug in Leah’s room playing a game of checkers and talking away. “Why’s he coming?”
“To visit his beloved fans of course.” Rulf said with a wide grin, making Leah grin wider, “but mostly just to visit his family” he told her, just to see her smile fade.
“But all teasing aside, he’s sure to make some kind of speech or something like that, something you’ll like.” He winked.
“I can’t wait.” She giggled excitedly. “Maybe he’ll talk to me…”
“I’m sure I could arrange that if you want…for a price.” He joked
“Oh you, trying to steal more kisses.”
Rulf moved his last normal checkers piece to the end of the board. “King me!”
With a sigh Leah took one of his dead pieces and placed in on top of the newly appointed king. “How could such a dummy like you be so good at board games?”
He just shrugged absentmindedly.
“Well, I yield.” She yawned, rising and stretching before grabbing a thick white-woolen blanket from the bed and tossing it to Rulf
“Giving up already?” He said with a sly smile, trying to shame her into playing out the game.
“Duh, I know what yield means” She replied, shooting him a victorious look.
She paused before blowing out the last candle, “Sweet dreams.”